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Posted: 2008-11-11 13:01:47
Mini Cine in Pretoria Street in the late 80's. OH THOSE WERE THE DAYS! I remember the place so well, the tatty old seats, the popcorn table outside, the staircase up, the two strange brothers who ran it for years, and the best part... tripple bills starting at midnight where you could bring your sleeping bags and park in the front with a few bottles of wine, a few spliffs, and a picnic basket.
Knowing the place so well made your story all the more titilating Andrea, and hormones have gone wild here ;-)
I guess I do owe you one EA.
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Posted: 2008-11-11 13:57:46
You are not going to believe this.. I spent 1 hour typing out my story. And when I hit the 'Submit reply' block , it says 'The site is not available'.. What do I do..
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Posted: 2008-11-11 14:28:04
I tend to write the replies I know will be long posts in Notepad first. Then I copy and paste into ESA once I am done. I have lost WAYYYYY TOOOOO many posts than i can count before i started doing this.
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Posted: 2008-11-11 14:30:09
Anyway Andrea.. Here goes. Just for you..
I call mine Double Trouble
Saturday afternoons in Johannesburg can be lethargic. Especially during January and February. It was at the beginning of last year , when , after a horrid game of golf , I decided that a visit to the brothel will do wonders for my ego.
I got to the brothel and the owner made a proposition that I could not refuse. Seeing that it was the last hour before she was going to close , she suggested that I book 2 girls for the hour. I was genuinely scared , but I decided to go for it. The two girls were Thais. The one was a short , sexy package of dynamite. Her name was Sonja. The other was a medium gorgeous looking lass. She was Michelle.
After all the formalities were taken care off , we proceeded to get into the swing of things . Sonja knelt in front of me and started unbuckling my belt and unzipping my jeans. Michelle started unbuttoning my shirt. I know that she ran into problems when she started giggling. I offered to help , but she politely refused.
I then felt a warm tongue on the tip of my already erect penis. That warm tongue worked it's way along the shaft down to the base.I groaned.. Michelle then started planting kisses onto my torso. Kisses with gentle biting. She worked herself to my chest and she started biting my nipples. I wanted to shriek , but I was too absorbed inthe sensation of Sonja's mouth on my dick. I had to start thinking of Algebra and Trigonometry in a desperate bid to prevent an early loss of load. Sensing my anguish , they stopped. They led me to the bed and they started kissing each other. Their hands wandered over each others breasts and hips.. I was enthralled.
Sonja then stood over me and her clean shaven pussy was within kissing range.. I moved my mouth towards her pussy. I thought that she would stop me , but she didn't. My mouth anchored itself onto her warm , wet pussy. My tongue , like an eel wriggled into her pussy.. She moaned and pressed my head firmly aginst her fanny.
I then felt a warm sensation on my hard dick. I looked down with one eye. And there was Michelle sucking and gently biting my hard dick. My other eye wandered upwards. It caught a glimpse of Sonja looking down at me. I think those two almost made me squint.
This went on for a few minutes , until I saw Michelles hands wander up Sonja's legs . They wandered to her ass-hole where she started circling her ass-hole.. I was in amazement.
I started licking Sonja harder and fingering her as well. She groaned as she enjoyed every minute of this..
It was at this time that I came and I felt the warm sperm on my tummy and hips.
I was in the company of Forbidden Angels
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Posted: 2008-11-11 14:31:28
The above story was true and the description was more graphic...
Out of sheer frustration of having to retype it and a stiff willy , I think the 'Stiffness' impact has been taken away..
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Posted: 2008-11-11 15:04:03
My original story was so vivid that I got a stiffy while writing it out...
They were stunning........
I have their numbers on speed-dial....
Andrea.. It was my first double.. I tried to re-create the magic with other girls , but it was not the same....
At one stage Michelle gently bit the tip of my dick.. That sensation was mind-blowing.... And when I saw her hand move towards Sonja's butt , I had to peak out of curiosity..
And at one stage I was sucking Sonja and fingering her .....
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